Chapter 1:
It was a dark, stormy night in the woods that lay below. The trees swayed with disbelief, and lightning struck with a fearsome blow. Chang,a leaf village academy student who was 8 years old at the time and was about to graduate from it, decided to take a shortcut through this treacherous woods on his way home from shuriken practice. When he got into the woods,he stopped for a second and started to tremble because he knew that it would not be an easy job going through this woods at night. So he then grabbed his kunai knife,put his leftover shuriken's in his pocket,and started to sprint home.
When Chang got half way through the woods, he started to hear a noise that sounded like a ninja from another village trying to ambush or capture him for their own reasons. So Chang stopped dead in his tracks and said in the loudest voice he could "I know your there, so if you are here come out now!" There was no response so Chang thought it was just the wind and started sprinting again. A minute later, the same sound started again so Chang got scared. He ran as fast as he could,but every second the noise got louder and louder. When Chang wasn't paying attention, he tripped over a tree root and hurt himself. "Ouch!" he screamed. Chang looked at himself and saw that it was just a bruise,but when he got up an adult ninja that looked like a jounin appeared. Chang said get away and threw a few shurikens at him, but the guy easily dodged them and started using a strange jutsu that knocked him out.
After Chang awoke from that weird jutsu,he saw that he was alone in a bed that appeared to be in an enclosed room. He then realized that his worst fears had become true. He was in a prison being held captive. He started to cry because he knew he was gonna be away from his home and friends for awhile, but when he started to cry a man appeared out of nowhere. Chang saw that he was the exact same man that knocked him out earlier that day. "What do you want wit....with me" Chang said out of fear. The man replied " We know that you are an orphan and have been with a foster family for a long time, so we decided to kidnap you to tell you something special about yourself that you did not know. " Chang replied with a calmer voice then before "What do you want to tell me I have nothing special about me that I can think of." The guy then said " Oh really? Well as a matter of fact you do. You are the last of your clan called the Uziba Clan. You have special powers that you have never even heard of. With our help you can make your powers unlock and you will become one of the strongest people of your age!" Chang said to the guy " what kind of powers do I have,what do you mean I知 the last of a clan,and what do you mean I am an orphan? I am so Confused please tell me this so I can understand cause I am only 8!"
The guy responded "You will know all the basics to your questions after we know what you what you have learned from your academy days. We are gonna get one of our experienced chunins to face you so we will know what you have already learned." Chang responded in an exciting voice "Yes!! My very first battle! Just you wait I will show you a lot of cool jutsus that I was taught by my dad! Bring it on!! Oh and by the way sir what is your name?" The guy said in a serious voice " My name is Saio and we will be awaiting your so called good jutsus and your very best attitude in the morning. Get some rest because it is 11:30 at night and if you wanna try and beat the chunin in the morning you need some energy." Then after Saio said that he vanished into thin air. Chang said to himself " Finally I can do what I have always wanted to do. Fight in a real ninja battle!" He jumped for joy because he knew he was gonna win the battle and make himself proud. After that moment he went onto his bed,got covered,and fell asleep.
When Chang woke up the next morning,he saw that there was a note on his door and it said "Meet us in the woods at 8:00 sharp. If you are late you will be severely punished. Sincerely, Saio" Chang thought" Oh no its 7:55 I have 5 minutes!" So he went out of his prison door, and Sprinted as fast as he could into the woods. When he got there He saw Saoi and a weird looking chunin with red bloody eyes and a face that looked like a monster of some sort. "I'm here I hope I知 not late" Chang said "You made it here in the nick of time young man it was about to turn 8:01 when you got here." replied Saio. "great now we can start the battle!" Chang said excitedly "Hold it little boy we have some rules that we have to go over. First the chunin and you fight until someone dies or you run out of chakra. Secondly you cannot use any kunai or weapons of any sort. You may only use food pills that I have in my back pocket." Saio then went to Chang and handed the pills to him " Use these wisely because these food pills are no ordinary pills. These pills strengthen your chakra 10 fold so I would advise you not use much of them due to you are a kid and the fact that these pills might kill you." "No worries Saio. I can handle these. I have had to use food pills before during one of my kunai training sessions with another genin,so I知 ok" Chang replied "Fine with me" Said Saio. After that Saio vanished and Chang knew that meant the battle was starting. " Get Ready for me to beat your butt!" Chang said "Not if I grind your bones up and drink your blood " said the weird chunin.
The two people stood there for a second and when Chang got off guard, The chunin came up to him and used a fire jutsu on him "Fire Style: Fire Bomb Jutsu" Raged the chunin. Then large bombs of flame came out of his mouth, 5 at a time, and followed Chang. " oh no I知 busted!" Yelled Chang. He dashed,ran,and skipped but he only dodged 1 of the bombs. "dang this guy is good What should I do now? I know multi-Shadow clone jutsu!" Chang raged. After that 1,000 shadow clones of Chang appeared and tried to attack the chunin. They severely beat him up,but Chang realized that it was just a substitution jutsu and that the chunin disappeared. " oh no!!" screamed Chang. Then Unexpectedly, Chang heard a jutsu but did not know what the chunin had said so then bits of fire spat out of the ground and destroyed half of his clones. " Darn!" The clones all said at the same time Chang then saw the chunin hiding behind the trees and caught him off guard by making him think that the clone infront of him of him was the real Chang. "Cha-Cha-Cha-Chang Barrage!" Yelled Chang and all his clones as they found their chance to strike him. The chunin went straight into the air and the clones started beating him up in a fashion that made him bleed all on his face. The Clones then held him and flipped in the air towards the ground and when they reached the ground the trees around them broke because the collision was so huge. After the collision the clones all went away and both the chunin and Chang collapsed on the ground barely able to speak.
"How....how do you know the shadow clone jutsu at your age and at that level!" said the chunin in a fainted voice. "Its because my Father is no other then the leaf villages Hokage Naruto Uzumaki!" screamed Chang "but.....but how.....how can this be?" the chunin said "Naruto is my father believe it. he taught me this jutsu when I was 7 and I mastered it the second day. I don't know how I did it,but i managed to get a perfect clone in seconds and the next day I had 100 clones,but I don't know how I had this many!" said Chang with all the force he could " n...no wonder your so str...strong..." said the chunin in a voice that could barely be heard. After that the chunin disappeared again and Chang said to himself" I don't want to lose, my chakra is half way gone from the shadow clones, and I am already tired. Maby I should take a food pill to increase my chakra. I mean I don't have much energy left in me to use rasengan to beat him, so I must do it . Its risky I know that for sure,but I値l try it anyways." Then Chang quickly took a food pill and saw how intensely his chakra built up "amazing! I have power!" Chang screamed Then out of nowhere the chunin came up and used hand signs that he did not know of and then shouted "Fire Style: Fire Clone Jutsu!" Suddenly out of the chunins mouth came a fire clone of himself and the chunin said "Beat this! this is my ultimate weapon. It has never failed me before. It is a complete clone of me made out of fire and whatever I do it does. There is no way you can beat it!" Chang started to get worried but then said " Shadow clone jutsu!"
Suddenly 10,000 clones came from the jutsu and Chang started attacking with them,but the chunins clone was to strong. The chunin and the clone started to spit exploding fireballs at him and the clones. There were only a mere 500 clones left after that one brutal attach. "ugh.....ugh that hurt!" shouted all the clones and Chang. That got them really mad,so they attacked again,but the chunin just did the same thing and Chang was left with 10 clones. "haha like I told you my fire is invincible! nobody has beat it yet and nobody has ever lived from it. Its useless. Give up kid you are a nothing." Then Chang knew that the effects of the food pill were wearing off and that his chakra would be gone after it did. "darn I have to act fast or else......." Chang then coughed up blood and knew the effects were getting to him. "this is my last chance I must do rasengan!" Chang called all of his clones away but one and started to spin a ball of intense chakra. "what is that ball your holding, it will never get through m..." but then before the chunin could finish his sentence Chang shouted "Rasengan!" and Chang jumped onto the fire clone, then the rasengan went directly through it, and I hit the chunin with a direct hit "Score!" shouted Chang. A second later the chunin went through 5 trees and got knocked out. " I did it...." Chang whispered as he fell to the ground uncontious, blood dripping down his face.
end of chapter 1
hey nice a naruto fan-fiction. very detaliled story.
should i keep going on it because i am thionking of doing that but i need others opinions cause i don't wanna write a stupid fanfic that everyone hates...
yeah, i would like to read another chapter of the story
I'm finishing the chapter tommorro then after that i'll do chater 2,but i think after this one i'm done it takes to much time and i'm only 14...lol
yeah! added a lot more to my fanfic its awsome i don't wanna have spoilers but Chang is someone special!!!(sry for double post :()
pretty good for a fan-fiction.