Ok I wrote my own Fan Fiction and as it says in the Title it is about Naruto. I have posted this on other sites so I have a lot of chapters done. Here is my story and I hope you injoy. ^^



Chapter 1

Well, it all started while Shikamaru was sitting next to me in Assassinations Class and Zabuza-sensei was telling us that were having a special guest coming in tomorrow. I wanted to know who the special guest was. After the bell rang, we would take a break and go to lunch. I walked up to Zabuza-sensei’s desk and I asked him who the special guest was. Zabuza said that Kakashi and a boy named Haku were coming. At lunch I was sitting with Naruto, Sasuke, and Hinata.
“Why did you go up to Zabuza’s desk after class Vicky? Sasuke asked.
“I wanted to know who the special guest was. Turns out that there are two of them.”
“TWO OF THEM” they all screamed.
“Yea Kakashi and some boy our age. His name is Haku. He must be Kakashi’s son or something because I have never heard of him before.”
All of a sudden a Jounnin level ninja walks over to us. His name is Kabuto.
“Shouldn’t you be in class Kabuto?” Naruto said to him.
“Yea but school let out early so I thought I would visit the Academy. I was gunna train after my visit.” Kabuto said.
“I’m done. I am going back to class”
Hinata said in a low voice.
“We’d better head back anyway. The bell is gunna ring soon.” Naruto said.
“Yea in about 2 min” Sasuke said.
As we were heading to Tactical Class Sasuke looked at me. “You look worried are you ok Vicky?”
“Yea I’m fine Sasuke. Just deep in thought”
After Tactical class it was time to go home. After school today Sasuke asked me to have a mock battle with him. We walked to the area where we first became Genin.
“Ready Vicky?”
“Yea Sasuke. Let’s do this.”
When we were done training it was 9:00pm. I looked at my watch.
“HOLY **** I AM LATE AGAIN. I gota go Sasuke. See ya tomorrow!”
As I was sprinting back to my house I heard Sasuke mumble something. I just barely heard it before he said good bye. It kept running through my mind.
“I need to get stronger to kill him”
I jumped up on a tree and came through my window. My mom was waiting in my room. “Where were you Vicky?”
“I was having a mock battle with Sasuke for training.” I replied back. Then my dad Tamaki Souh walked in and stared at me.

Chapter 2

All of a sudden my dad ran away. I chased after him. I called after him,
“Dad where are you going?”
He told me to stay back. I stayed back because something told me that I had to and his voice sounded firm. Then the next thing you heard was a scream. I went in the direction my dad went in to make sure he was fine. When I got to the place I heard the scream from I saw my dad standing up.
“Thank god you are ok dad. I was worried because I heard a scream and I didn’t know if you were alright. I am sorry that I didn’t listen to you but I wanted to make sure that you were ok.”
“Thanks for your concern Vicky” Tamaki said “But I am alright. The only reason I told you to go home was because there was a ninja following you. You were capable of taking them out but they were coming for you. I don’t know why.”
Tamaki clenches his fists. “But I will find out soon. While were out why don’t we go for some ramen? Tomorrow is the battles for the Chunin Exam and aren’t you in it? That’s why we had you come home early. You need to rest so you can do your best. Go call your mother and tell her to meet me at the ramen shop.”
“Ok dad. I will call mom and have her meet us there” He put his hand on my head.
“Ok that’s my girl. I’m going on ahead. I will meet you there.”
I look for a phone. I finally found one.
“Mom, Dad and I are going to the ramen shop. He wants us to meet
him there…...Ok see ya at the shop, bye.”
As I am walking to the shop, I sensed something. I turned and looked back. No one was there. Was I imagining things? I heard my dad call from across the street. I smiled and waved to him. While I was eating my ramen my parents were chatting away. I had a bad feeling in my stomach. I felt paranoid. When we got home I went to bed. My parents asked me if I had any homework. I told them no because the Chunin Exams were tomorrow. Who ever made it in to the battles did not have homework. Our Sensei’s told us to rest and be prepared for tomorrow. I went to bed at 10:00 that night and the next time I woke up it was 9:00am. The Exam started in 2 hours. I got dressed and went downstairs and ate a light breakfast. My parents told me something but I wasn’t paying any attention. I was focusing on the exam. Everyone from the village and people from other villages were going to be there watching us. Besides Sasuke I are the best ninja this year being tested. Sasuke of Corse is better then me. Last night he pushed me to my limit. I felt a little bit stronger after I trained with him. I am still sore from last night but I need to do this. I finally arrive at the arena where we are being tested. We took a look at who we are battling. I am battling Sasuke. We are the 3rd battle. The battles before us are Naruto vs. Gaara then Neji vs. Temari then Sasuke vs. Me. The other 3 Genin dropped out. Naruto one his battle and Neji one his battle. Now it was down to me and Sasuke. We both stepped down off the platform that we were standing on. Somehow I felt stronger when Sasuke and I stepped on to the arena. The Proctor said that we can begin any time we want. This was my time to shine and the battle everyone was waiting for. Sasuke started to run in my direction and he threw a kunai knife at me. I tried to dodge it with using the replacement justu, but the kunai hit me and I started to bleed.
“I see you aren’t holding anything back Sasuke. I intend to do the same. That training session we had last night helped me. You pushed me to my limits and you made me stronger. I thank you for that. But I was holding back.”
Sasuke looked at me.
“You didn’t see my true strength. Only my dad and my sensei have. Now the whole village will see it.”
I charged at him full force. I punched Sasuke and he flew back to the wall. People were in awe. All eyes in the arena were on me. People were amazed when they saw me punch Sasuke. Then the next thing you knew Sasuke was up on his feet. I was amazed at this. That was all I had and Sasuke got up.
“That is some punch you got there Vicky. A few more of those and I may be down for awhile. But that is not enough to stop me.” Sasuke said.
“That’s what I thought Sasuke. I have a little trick up my sleeve. I have been working on this for awhile.”
I started to gather up charka for my next attack. You can see the charka swarm around me. I bit my finger and made a few hand signs. I put my hands to the ground. “Summoning Justu!”
A huge black dragon appeared. His name is Kyo.
“What can I do for you Vicky?” The dragon said in a deep voice.
“Let me get up on your back Kyo, take me flying through the sky.”
“As you wish Vicky”.
I got up on the dragons back and he flew up in the air. I made another hand sign. “Shadow Clone Justu! Now try to find me Sasuke.”
Sasuke closes his eyes. Then his eyes turn red.
“Oh no it’s the Sharingan! He can find me easily now.”
Sasuke made some hand signs. Then you hear some chirping noise. “I have never seen that attack. What is it called?” I asked.
“It is called Chidori. It is used in assassinations. You are a tough opponent Vicky. I have never seen someone combine a Summoning Justu with a Shadow Clone Justu before. That was clever of you. But it all ends here.”
I took out some Kunai knives and Star Shuriken to try to stop Sasuke. He got hit with them but it didn’t stop him. He hit me with his Chidori. My dragon disappears and I fall to the ground. The proctor declared that Sasuke had one the match. I had to get rushed to the medical core because I had such bad injuries. The Hokage will announce the Chunins tomorrow. After I was cleaned up Sasuke came up to my room.
“Sorry I went all out on you. I don’t know why but I had this rage that I took out on you. I don’t know where it came from. Anyway how are you feeling?”
“Who is it Sasuke?” I said to him.
“Who is what?” he asked
“I heard you mumble something yesterday and I want to know. Who do want to kill?”
There was a moment of silence in the room. Sasuke looked down at the floor.
“I want to kill my brother. He wiped out my whole clan. He told me that I wasn’t worth killing. I need to get stronger so I can kill him and avenge my clan. I also want to restore my clan as well.”
Then Sasuke stormed out of the room.

Chapter3

After Sasuke left I fell asleep and I was knocked out for awhile. I guess I was just exhausted. Later that day my parents were just informed that I was in the hospital. They didn’t come to my match because they were running late and they missed it. As people were coming up and down the narrow hall I heard rapid foot movement. I hear a knock on my door.
“Come in” I said weakly.
It was Shikamaru, my father, and Asuma-sensei.
“It looks like you took quite a beating here Vicky.” My father said.
“I trained with the best in the village and I still lost the match. How is that possible? Sasuke pushed me to my trained limits. I didn’t go all out on him with everything I had.”
“Because……..because you want to see Sasuke go to the top and you want him to succeed in whatever he does. That’s why you lost the match.” Asuma said
“But when we stepped off the platform I felt stronger……..I don’t know why but I did”
“Hey Shikamaru, while you’re here do you want to play a game of Go? I haven’t played a worthy opponent in awhile.”
“I almost beat you last time” Asuma and Tamaki said at the same time.
“Sure, let me just get a board and some stones.”
“There is no need to. I asked the nurses to bring one in. I knew you would come eventually”
The game lasted an hour and I always lost to Shikamaru. I was determined to win this time.
“I resign there is nothing I can do.” Shikamaru said
I looked exited because I have finally won against him.
We were rejoicing when a nurse came in. She said that visiting hours were over for today. My dad asked if he could stay because he is family. She nodded her head.
“Who are you? You aren’t my father so who are you?”
“I am your father. You must be tired. Go to sleep for awhile you will feel better.”
As I was just about to go to sleep I heard the man take out a kunai knife to try to stab me. My dad opened the door and saw the imposter. He came running in to my room and kicked him. He crashed on to the floor.
“Get the hell away from my daughter Kakashi”
I sat up in bed quickly even though I was still very weak.
“Kakashi, what are you doing here? Why did you use the transformation justu to look like my dad?”
“I just thought you would like to be around someone that isn’t one of your teachers especially since Asuma was here. I didn’t want to put stress on you.”
“Tamaki, can I talk to you outside? It is important.”
“Fine Kakashi. We’ll be right back Vicky.”
“Ok dad”
Kakashi and Tamaki walk outside and close my door. Seeing as how they did that I guess this was really important.
“Do you have any information yet Kakashi?”
“Well I know you wanted some of the ANBU Black Opts to do this but I did some investigation myself.”
“Did anything come up?”
“Do you remember the night when your daughter came in late? Well I was shopping and I saw these ninjas following her. I dropped my bags and followed them.”
“Why did you do that?”
“I was worried about her. Now can I continue Tamaki?”
It was quiet.
“Now as I was saying, I followed her for a little while figuring she can sense them but she never did. I followed her all the way back to the house and I hid in some bushes so if the ninjas attacked her and Haruhi I could ward them off. I sensed something behind me. I attacked whatever it was. It was a ninja. When the ninja was down I asked who they worked for. He responded “Naraku. I work for a demon named Naraku.”
“That’s all I need to know Kakashi. Thanks”
“No Problem. I guess I am gunna go home. Tell Vicky I will see her later at “the grounds” when she is better.”
“Alright. Later Kakashi.”
My dad walked back into my room. He saw me getting up.
“What are you getting up for young lady?”
“Oh dad I was just going to open the window next to my bed”
“Get back in bed; I will do it for you.”
“Ok fine. Ya know you get on my nerves sometimes.”
“That’s what I do. Ok how about I go get us some dinner. I am starving.”
“Yea me too. In the mean time I guess I will call mom so she doesn’t worry about what happened.”
“Ok you do that.”
After he closed the door I called my mom to tell her what happened. She sounded all worried when she heard it. She had work around the house to do so she had to go. I looked at my clock; it was already 7:30. It was getting late.
“Vicky I am back and I brought a friend.”
A brown haired blue-eyed 16-year old walked on to my room. He seemed to be carrying an unusually large sword in a part of his Organization XIII cloak.
“Mori what are you doing here? I thought you left with all the other Special Jounnin on a mission the other day.”
He looked annoyed. But he wasn’t gunna yell at me because he could see that I was in pain. His anger turned in to compassion.
“I thought I was going to go but the needed certain people for the mission. I guess I was lucky that I didn’t go so I could see your match. You did pretty well for first real battle against Sasuke. I see you two training all the time together, trying to make each other stronger.”
There was a silence in the room.
“Dad it’s getting late, why don’t you go home so mom doesn’t worry about you.”
“I guess you are right. You do know how your mother gets when either of us are late. I will come back tomorrow and check on you.”
“Alright dad, I’ll see you tomorrow then.”
“Thank god your dad is gone. Now I can shed this skin that I hate so much."

Chapter 4

Mori started to transform when a Chameleon with a present on his back walked in.
“You can come in Matt. I won’t bite.”
“Matt isn’t here. It is just me.” Shadow replied
“Then I suppose this is from Matt then.”
“Yea. He sends his regards. He also wants me to pass along a message. Be at the Ichiraku Ramen shop when you are better.”
“I see he is treating me again. Alright tell him in 3 days I will be there.”
“Ok then. I need to get back so I’ll see you later Vicky.”
“Bye Shadow.”
When Shadow left the room Mori transformed into a black dragon. His eyes turned red but he was still in the same clothes. Nothing had changed except his form. This was his true form.
“It’s been awhile since I could do this. I came up with a justu that works only inside. When I transform only certain people can see me like this.”
I stopped Mori from explaining his new technique.
“When I get out of here I need you to bring me to a clearing where you got your powers.”
“Why do you want me to do this?” Mori asked me
“Because I want to transform in to a dragon. I know that is what you did to gain your powers. I watched you do it all alone. All that pain. I need someone there by my side.”
“Are you shure you want to do this? It is very painful.”
“Yea I am shure”
“This pain that you will undergo is not even known to man. It is only known to the people who transform in to the dragon. It does last awhile.”
“How many days does it last? I remember you not being in school for awhile.”
“It lasts for two weeks. But since yesterday was the last day-“
“How long was I out for?”
“Oh yea I forgot that you still go to the academy. Tomorrow is the last day for you right?”
“Yea it is. I will be out of here tomorrow. It seems that I can be up on my feet because I requested that Tsunade come here to heal my legs so I can walk.”
There was a knock at the door. It started to open slowly.
“Speak of the devil.”
“You feeling ok. Only certain people can request me. They told me it was urgent.”
“I need to talk to you.”
“If it is about-“
“No it isn’t about what you are thinking Tsunade. I need a favor. But first, can you heal my broken leg?”
Tsunade sighed
“Fine.”
“I need to talk to you about something.”
“What is it?” Tsunade questioned me
“I am gunna undergo something. There will be intense pain so I need you to be there by my side all the time.”
“I see what you are going to do. Are you shure you want to do this?”
“I didn’t say what it was yet.”
“I can tell by the look on your face. Your friend here asked me the same question.”
There was an uneasy silence in the room.
“Fine, I’ll do it. But you do what I want in return.”
“Ok I’ll give my bracelet up and you can sell it to pay off that debt you owe.”
“I’m all done here. You can leave tomorrow. I will see you after school”
Sora got up and he gave me a look. I knew what that meant. He opened and walked out and shut the door behind him. I looked at my clock it was 11:45 pm. I fell asleep because a lot has happened and I was exhausted. When I woke up it was 8:00 and my father was already there waiting for me to get up. School started in an hour so I needed to move quickly. My dad walked me to school. I felt like a baby because I usually walk by myself.
“Do you really need to do this dad? I am fine on my own, really I am.”
“I need to run some errands for your mother anyway so I thought I would walk you to school.”
“I really don’t want to be seen with my father so can you go run your errands now? Please?”
“Fine. But promise you will be home right after school.”
“I already have plans dad. I am going to Sakura’s house after school.”
“Here are your books. I am going now so I don’t embarrass you. Be home by 10:45 ok?”
“Fine dad, see ya later”
As I turned around to go to school I see Mori waiting at the doors for me. He transformed back into his human form so he can be seen by other people.
“What are you doing here? I thought you were coming after school?”
“I was but you remember that the last day of school is only 3 hours right?”
“Oh yea I forgot about that. So I guess you are going to wait here then?”
“Not really. Since you are in 8th grade you are graduating and there is the barbeque so I thought I would come to hangout here today.”
“I guess its ok and it is better then you at home drinking sake all day like you normally do.”
Mori blushes and looks away.
“Yea well I thought it was time for a change. So I decided to come here for awhile.”
The bell rang so it was time to go inside to get ready for the barbeque. I took out all the tables and chairs. I took a break because my arm hurt and I didn’t want to strain my arm too much. By the time I was ready to work again everything was done. There was so much to do. Signing year books, taking pictures, playing games and so much more. When school was over Sora took me to the clearing. Tsunade was already there waiting for us to come.
“Where were you? I was waiting here for hours.”
“I had to go to school today Tsunade. Today was the last day and I didn’t want to miss it.”
“What is your excuse Mori? You must not have been drinking because are Sober.”
“I was with Vicky all day. I wanted to see some people so I went to school with her”
Tsunade walked over to me. She leaned close to my ear.
“Was he stalking you?
I started to blush a little
“N-no he wasn’t. He has been with me all day. He didn’t do anything stupid either.”
Tsunade backed up from me.
“Alright, before we do this are you shure you want to go through with it.”
I answered with a nod.
“Alright. We will start tomorrow”
“WHAT” I screamed
“I thought we were going to do this today.”
Tsunade glared at me.
“I need certain supplies and I don’t have them. I need to get them. All I need is tonight and by tomorrow I will have them. In the mean time, Sora needs to fill you in on details anyway. I am going. I need to be in the best shape possible because Sora tired me out for all the times I needed to use my charka. Be here at 5:00 am and we will get started.”
There was a puff of smoke and then she was gone.

Feel free to leave me some comments so I can improve my story.

very good fanfiction. i myself am a naruto fan. but very good fanfaction

It is very good. I like it. ^_^

Thanks ^^. I have had writes block. I hopefully will have somthing soon. Thanks for the positive feedback.

*double post*

I have a new Chapter. Ity is VERY short. My friend said I should post it because there is a good cliffhanger. so here is the next chapter.

Chapter 5

As Mori and Vicky started to walk away from the clearing, team 14 walks by. These people were my best friends in the entire world and they are the first team in history to consist of all kunoichi. There names are Chelsea and Bella Namacari and Melanie Takashio. They were some of my best friends in the entire world. Melanie looked over at me and Mori. She smirked. She called over to us.
“Hey Vicky! What are you and Mori doing out here?” She said loudly
“Oh hey Mel! We had to meet Tsunade here. She is helping me…I mean us with something. Why is something the matter?” I called back
“Your dad was looking for you. He needs to tell you something important.”
“Thanks Mel.”
I look over at Mori
“Mori let’s go! I can’t keep my dad waiting.”
Mori and I start to sprint back to my house when I see my dad standing on a tree.
“Dad what are you doing here? Mori and I were just going to look for you.”
Tamaki smiled at me and Mori.
“The Hokage wants to see you Vicky. He said it is urgent.”
“Oh really? Then I better get going then. Mori, I’ll see you later.”
“Alright Vicky, I’ll see you later. Meet me at the usual spot. I’ll be waiting for you there. We need to get started on your training.” Mori said with a warm smile.
“Alright I’ll see you later then.”
I was sprinting to the Hokage’s office as fast as I could. I knew I was close because I saw his building. When I got to the stairs I stopped and I took a deep breath and I walked up the stairs. I knocked on the door and I heard a voice. He said to come in.
“You wanted to see me Lord Hokage?” Vicky said